MykertheGeek's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GMSU 11-24-17]

these are always pretty good. But remember you have flash. Why not use it? something like this could be made with ms paint and windows movie maker and it would be 80% as good. In fact, I wouldn't mind an MS paint aesthetic for this show. Provided only the art assets are done in MS paint and then imported and animated in flash. I think this show has a lot of potential. Perhaps try inserting some sketch comedy scenes, like the Tonight Show with Jimmy Fallon, since that's what you're going for. Maybe add some cutaway gags and some interview segments to flesh out the show, because right now it's pretty basic and maybe slowly stepping up your game could improve your animation skills. Perhaps you can add a silly overarching plot (like if Jimmy Pee's arch-nemisis, Johnny Poo, was actually a criminal mastermind).GMSU could be like the next Strong Bad emails, and if you don't know what I'm talking about, click this link: homestarrunner.com/sbemail.html

threebrain responds:

Hey thanks! These are great ideas. Yeah I want to improve the art and everything. Was hard writing all the jokes but now I got my buddy helping me with that so I can hit stuff like exactly what you are saying. Having Jimmy Fallon type skits is a killer idea haha will try that. Thanks! Yeah and cut away gags. Loved Strong Bad. Yeah you are right. Will work harder.

[CLIFF]

nice to see you practising gmod animation. However, your frame by frame animations didn't have enough weight or life to them, and the pacing of the entire thing was kind of bad. it didn't stop for 1 fraction of a second and give any weight to the actions and kind of went on at a constant, pace, all starting when another stopped and never taking a break. I would recommend picking up a book called the animator's survival kit, a very well renowned guide on animation, and watching DasBoSchitt's series "know your schitt" a guide on the technicalities of working with gmod and how to do stuff like removing gui elements ("17 objects unfrozen"), clever tricks, and what recording software to use.

stimpyfan9 responds:

I am working on a better Gmod Animation, Tea Time.

I Used Sony Vegas Pro 15 Trial, Now I use Sony Vgeas Pro 14 Full Version.

Also, Tea Time got cancelled, It was replaced by the video that just got removed from Newgrounds, so I consider that one, a YouTube exclusive, with all my other stuff.

[ShadowTH Vs Cutman!]

eh. not worth my time

G0ttlieb responds:

Understandable

[SeaRings halloween]

Eh.
this is newgrounds, a place for original animation and games,
Not youtube.
I don't think anyone cares. Plus, the games graphics aren't very good

MichaelPolson responds:

thx, for the advice :) what's the type of graphics you like?

[Good Morning Shut Up with Jimmy Pee! 11-02-17]

This is really not that funny.
The lines are a bit messy,
even I, an aspie, had conversations more structured than this.
And the rape joke wasn't funny.

threebrain responds:

Sorry! haha I'll try harder. I'm not into super clean lines though, but I will work harder on the jokes. Thanks for your feedback. For real tho.