MykertheGeek's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GMSU 11-24-17]

these are always pretty good. But remember you have flash. Why not use it? something like this could be made with ms paint and windows movie maker and it would be 80% as good. In fact, I wouldn't mind an MS paint aesthetic for this show. Provided only the art assets are done in MS paint and then imported and animated in flash. I think this show has a lot of potential. Perhaps try inserting some sketch comedy scenes, like the Tonight Show with Jimmy Fallon, since that's what you're going for. Maybe add some cutaway gags and some interview segments to flesh out the show, because right now it's pretty basic and maybe slowly stepping up your game could improve your animation skills. Perhaps you can add a silly overarching plot (like if Jimmy Pee's arch-nemisis, Johnny Poo, was actually a criminal mastermind).GMSU could be like the next Strong Bad emails, and if you don't know what I'm talking about, click this link: homestarrunner.com/sbemail.html

threebrain responds:

Hey thanks! These are great ideas. Yeah I want to improve the art and everything. Was hard writing all the jokes but now I got my buddy helping me with that so I can hit stuff like exactly what you are saying. Having Jimmy Fallon type skits is a killer idea haha will try that. Thanks! Yeah and cut away gags. Loved Strong Bad. Yeah you are right. Will work harder.

[SeaRings halloween]

Eh.
this is newgrounds, a place for original animation and games,
Not youtube.
I don't think anyone cares. Plus, the games graphics aren't very good

MichaelPolson responds:

thx, for the advice :) what's the type of graphics you like?

[Good Morning Shut Up with Jimmy Pee! 11-02-17]

This is really not that funny.
The lines are a bit messy,
even I, an aspie, had conversations more structured than this.
And the rape joke wasn't funny.

threebrain responds:

Sorry! haha I'll try harder. I'm not into super clean lines though, but I will work harder on the jokes. Thanks for your feedback. For real tho.